Template:Did you know nominations/Murder of Ng Yuk Tim
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The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 15:43, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
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Murder of Ng Yuk Tim[edit]
- ... that preparations for cosplay led to the death of a Malaysian teenager?
Created by Bonkers The Clown (talk). Self nominated at 13:26, 25 October 2013 (UTC).
- article passes as to length, newness, quality, but a slight problem with the hook. The article and sources say she was going to make a costume, not actual cosplay. Thus the hook is slightly misleading/inaccurate. If you insert "preparations for" before cosplay that would take care of it, or perhaps "that making a costume led ..." would work. Aboutmovies (talk) 07:43, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
- Done. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 09:24, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
All good. Though more hooky hook would be "... that making costumes can get you killed? But that might be insensitive. Aboutmovies (talk) 15:52, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
- But I actually like it! Sure, we must respect the deceased, but, well, sure sounds hooky in a fun way. Heheheh. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 07:05, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
