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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 06:45, 5 March 2013 (UTC).

Murray Battery

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5x expanded by Bloom6132 (talk). Self nominated at 23:25, 15 February 2013 (UTC).

  • Date, size, hook are fine. My concern is length, at 257 words it barely passes, and this is counting the lead which repeats some facts from the body. Would it be possible to expand it so it passes without the repetition in lead counting towards it? One-two sentences would do it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:58, 3 March 2013 (UTC)