Template:Did you know nominations/Mussafah

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

Mussafah[edit]

  • ... that in 1996, the Abu Dhabi Seaports Authority announced a Dh2.4 billion development plan of Mussafah and a new port?
Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Ewing Galloway

5x expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Bonkers The Clown (talk), and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 19:59, 5 June 2013 (UTC).

  • An informative article about an area not sufficiently covered on wikipedia. Length after expansion check, sources check (AGF for offline RS), date and QPQ all check. This nom is good to go. --Al Ameer son (talk) 05:26, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Close paraphrasing concerns (see WP:ERRORS) — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:33, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
    • Strange, I actually clicked the "Copyvio check" button and it was only 6% confidence of violation. --Al Ameer son (talk) 00:54, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
None of us are responsible for the vio, it was there before we started if you check the history.. I'll reword. Any "close paraphrasing" since is probably due to the fact that much of it is eocnomic based with figures and specific areas of growth so it is difficult to avoid it seeming similar. I'll try to investigate and reword.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 09:09, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

I've reworded the most obvious examples that I could find, please let me know if there are still any problematic sentences and I'll reword.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 09:33, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

  • This looks a bit better to me and the scanner, but we should also have source spotchecks. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:01, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
  • I think it's OK now. I've done some more rewording which should help. The original review comments above by Al Ameer son still stand. Prioryman (talk) 19:25, 26 June 2013 (UTC)