Template:Did you know nominations/Navroji Mistri

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 04:55, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Navroji Mistri

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• ... that Navroji Mistri donated SGD$950,000 to build a pediatric ward because he "cannot bear to think of sick children ... lying on the floors of hospital wards"?

• ALT1: ... that Navroji Mistri's soft drinks business was so successful that he was able to purchase the entire Caldecott Hill Estate?
• Reviewed: Owari no Hoshi no Love Song

Created by Lionratz (talk). Self-nominated at 07:39, 11 October 2015 (UTC).

• new enough, long enough, qpq done, inline citations and refs checks, hooks are factual and interesting. I would suggest alt1.BabbaQ (talk) 12:19, 18 October 2015 (UTC)

• BabbaQ, the review does not cover the remainder of the "within policy" criteria, such as close paraphrasing and neutrality. Please complete this review, being sure to check all the DYK criteria. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:40, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Close paraphrasing and neutrality checks and is ok. I still suggest alt1 hook. BabbaQ (talk) 17:53, 19 October 2015 (UTC)