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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:49, 1 June 2012 (UTC)

North Foreland Lodge

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Created/expanded by Moonraker (talk). Self nom at 15:54, 22 May 2012 (UTC)

  • All checks out. I removed i-links to common phrases and added ext. source to the hook.
  • Both hooks are over the 200 character maximum at 207 characters for the original and 232 for ALT1. Please come up with an ALT that's of a valid length. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:01, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
Sorry about that. Poeticbent talk 17:01, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
I'm not quite sure "just in time" works, or even that wording to reflect that this was at the last minute is really necessary. The key here is that she gave permission and then changed her mind. How about this variant:
The date isn't essential, and I'd like to tweak that some more. May I suggest Alt4 below, which is only 193 characters? Moonraker (talk) 20:48, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
ALT2 and ALT3 are dodgy due to the connotations of words like "permitted," but the "agreed" in ALT4 resolves that, and the hook is short enough. I have a minor rewording suggestion that also is the right length: