Template:Did you know nominations/Occupational epidemiology

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:25, 26 August 2017 (UTC)

Occupational epidemiology[edit]

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... that occupational epidemiology is the study of health outcomes from exposure to workplace hazards? Source: [1]

Reviewed: Ostreopsis

5x expanded by Asfyris (talk). Nominated by John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) at 18:01, 10 August 2017 (UTC).

Article is long enough and was recently expanded 5x. As far as I can tell, the nominator has already had 5 DYK nominations, so a QPQ review requirement still needs to be met. And while the hook is appropriately cited in the article, it really doesn't seem "hook-y" - it's essentially just a definition of the subject (X is Y).--Slon02 (talk) 20:00, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

QPQ provided. How about this? John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 19:28, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

ATL1: ... that early occupational epidemiology studies established health risk factors for gold and silver miners, chimney sweeps, and workers using asbestos? Source: [2]

@John P. Sadowski (NIOSH): Looks good. However, you need to cite the two sentences in the article that deal with miners' health—even if the citation at the end of the paragraph covers them, it needs to be repeated at the end of those two sentences. See Rule 3b: "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient." --Usernameunique (talk) 20:31, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

@Usernameunique and Slon02: I added it. John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 18:04, 25 August 2017 (UTC)

Thanks, all set. --Usernameunique (talk) 02:10, 26 August 2017 (UTC)