Template:Did you know nominations/On the Run Tour (Beyoncé and Jay-Z)
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The result was: promoted by ThirdWard (talk) 19:06, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
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On the Run Tour (Beyoncé and Jay-Z)[edit]
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that the On the Run Tour, a joint tour by Beyoncé and Jay-Z, was conceived and launched in just one month, compared to most stadium tours that take a year of planning?
ALT1:... that the On the Run Tour, a joint tour by Beyoncé and Jay-Z, took just one month of planning before launching, compared to most stadium tours that take over a year?ALT2:... that the On the Run Tour, a joint tour by Beyoncé and Jay-Z, took just one month of planning and routing before launching to the public?
Improved to Good Article status by ThirdWard (talk). Self nominated at 11:46, 9 March 2015 (UTC).
Improved to GA status. QPQ not needed as I believe this is the users first nomination. Character length of article is 30156 characters. Hooks are sourced and cited. Everything checks out fine, but all three options are basically the same nomination worded differently. I don't think it's particularly interesting, and because all three are pretty much the same, I don't feel like I can promote this. I think you need to come up with one or two other alternatives that are not related to the launching in one month idea. I reviewed the GAN, so I know that there is a lot you could draw upon for a more interesting hook. — ₳aron 21:51, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
- As you requested I have some new hooks that will hopefully be acceptable below @Calvin999:
- ALT3:... that Beyoncé and Jay-Z's On the Run Tour was promoted by a faux movie trailer which featured eight celebrity cameo appearances?
ALT4:... that the On the Run Tour, a joint tour by Beyoncé and Jay-Z, was the fastest selling concert ever at the M&T Bank Stadium in Baltimore, Maryland?
