Template:Did you know nominations/Pūloʻuloʻu

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The result was: promoted by Kingsif (talk) 02:58, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Pūloʻuloʻu

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~~... that Pūloʻuloʻu or kapu sticks, traditional symbols of authority for the aliʻi of Hawaii, are featured on the Hawaiian State Seal?~~

Comment: SPECIAL HOLD DATE: May (Asian Pacific American Heritage Month)
Reviewed: Elmhurst Hospital Center

Created/expanded by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 05:02, 28 March 2020 (UTC).

@KAVEBEAR:, please expand this a little. The DYK check tool says this is 1165 characters, and you need to get it up to 1500 characters. Thanks. — Maile (talk) 14:10, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that King Kalākaua was presented with a pūloʻuloʻu, a traditional symbol of authority for the aliʻi of Hawaii, made from a narwhal tusk during his coronation?

@Maile66: Made additions and change the hook. KAVEBEAR (talk) 01:23, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Suggest you link aliʻi rather than putting the word chiefs in parenthesis. — Maile (talk) 01:30, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Done. KAVEBEAR (talk) 01:37, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Review by Maile

QPQ

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Eligibility

Created by KAVEBEAR on March 28, 2020
1812 characters (308 words) "readable prose size"

Sourcing

Every paragraph is sourced

Hook

Hook is interesting and has 150 characters
I'm having trouble finding which source is for the hook. I see where it's stated in the article, but there is no citation after that sentence. DYK reviewing guide says the hook fact in the article must be immediately followed by an inline citation. The sourcing is mostly that which I cannot access, but I can AGF on that. So would you please add a citation immediately following the sentence?

Images

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Copyvio check

Earwig is working!! No issues of concern 1

I added the inline citation. The source for the hook can be found in this clipping: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/38294537/capt-n-tripp-gifts-kalakaua-with-a/ and whaling from this https://www.nytimes.com/1986/11/23/travel/palace-of-the-last-hawaiian-king.html ("...stands a seven-foot narwhal tusk, the gift of a whaling captain...") KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:55, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Good to go.. — Maile (talk) 10:51, 15 April 2020 (UTC)