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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Baldy Bill (sharpen the razor|see my reflection) 16:56, 26 October 2013 (UTC)

Philip Gunn

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Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 15:38, 17 October 2013 (UTC).

  • New, Long enough, hook cited to reliable source. Satisfies the eligibility criteria. -- SMS Talk 17:01, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Hook doesn't make clear how long this was, and is less interesting than it could be because of it; Gunn could have taken the speakership in 1892, which isn't nearly as impressive as 2012, when he did win it. Suggesting ALT1, which adds "in 2012," to the original:
I've added a few words and the necessary inline sourcing so the revised hook is fully supported in the article. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:42, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
ALT1 approved; Agree, the addition of year makes the hook more interesting. -- SMS Talk 02:58, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
Sounds good to me. Thanks for the help! – Muboshgu (talk) 11:45, 25 October 2013 (UTC)