Template:Did you know nominations/Potato Valley Cafe

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:10, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

Potato Valley Cafe[edit]

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... ~~that Potato Valley Cafe, located in Annapolis, Maryland, only serves potatoes as meals?~~

Reviewed: Connie Talbot's Holiday Magic

Created/expanded by SL93 (talk). Self nom at 23:19, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Hook review
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There seems to be a bit of filler. For example, just writing that there has been coverage by a newspaper or magazine is not very encyclopedic; it is implied by including information from that coverage. Also, the Las Vegas location is mentioned twice when the article itself doesn't quite have a lead section. The GBooks reference is also a little messed up. Could this be cleaned up a bit? Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:21, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

- I cleaned up the article. The Las Vegas location and the Annapolis location both serve sandwiches and salads also.
  - ...that the owners of Potato Valley Cafe, located in Annapolis, Maryland, are not worried about competition because their signature cuisine is unusual? SL93 (talk) 22:54, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

ALT1 good to go. I changed it just a bit (removed "so") Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:43, 21 September 2011 (UTC)