Template:Did you know nominations/Quirino Ordaz Coppel

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:38, 21 July 2016 (UTC)

Quirino Ordaz Coppel[edit]

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~~... that Governor-elect of Sinaloa Quirino Ordaz Coppel was the first director general of the DIF in the Mexican Federal District?~~

Reviewed: Whang Bo-ryung

Created by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 21:27, 2 July 2016 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. As all sources are foreign-language, unable to check for close paraphrasing. The hook, though, is not so hooky for non-Mexicans. Do you have another idea? QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 21:03, 18 July 2016 (UTC)

@Yoninah: ALT1: ... that Governor-elect of Sinaloa Quirino Ordaz Coppel, owner of two hotels in Mazatlán, sat on the Tourism Commission in the Chamber of Deputies?

Raymie (t • c) 21:47, 18 July 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. ALT1 is interesting and I tweaked it a little. Foreign-language hook refs AGF (although I checked them through Google Translate) and cited inline. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:59, 18 July 2016 (UTC)