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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 02:29, 7 September 2012 (UTC)

Ridwan dynasty[edit]

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Created/expanded by Al Ameer son (talk). Self nom at 15:22, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook sentence does not have a fn attached to it, verified the gate slave from the ref given for the subsequent sentence (Zeʼevi p. 39), however did not find the information that he was Christian on that page. Skäpperöd (talk) 21:40, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I might have to rework the hook, because his former Christian faith is only implied in the source which say he was a "slave of the gate (kapi kul), a product of the devsirme system ..." The slaves of the devsirme system were from Christian families. If this implication doesn't cut it for the hook, let me know what the best option is. --Al Ameer son (talk) 23:40, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
  • Drive-by comments, not a review: Al Ameer son, pls be reminded of the QPQ peer review requirement. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 03:18, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
  • Review done and removed "Christian" from hook pending direct reference to his former faith. --Al Ameer son (talk) 06:36, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Needs a full review now that QPQ is satisfied. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:05, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
The Arap thing was inconsistent throughout the article. I've changed it to "Arap". Was it supposed to be 'Arap? The sentence with the hook in needs to have a reference directly afterwards, not at the end of the paragraph. The article is long enough, and was new enough when submitted. Secretlondon (talk) 20:58, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
Arap is a Turkish nickname, not a given name. It stands for "Arab." Anyway, it's not a major issue and I added the citation to the hook line in the article. --Al Ameer son (talk) 21:16, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
Good to go. AGF on the offline source. Secretlondon (talk) 22:25, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
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