Template:Did you know nominations/Robert Sacchi

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:23, 21 July 2021 (UTC)

Robert Sacchi

  • Reviewed: Commissions of sewers
  • Comment: Eligible per Rule 1d, because it is only scheduled to appear in the "Recent Deaths" section of ITN and not as a bold link.

5x expanded by Bloom6132 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:31, 2 July 2021 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, well-sourced and neutrally written, and no copyright violations detected. QPQ done. Both hooks are appropriately cited in the article; I personally prefer the first one as it's pretty funny. However, I think a bracketed word in a quote usually indicates the minor substitution of a single word, while ellipses are generally used to indicate an omitted phrase. What do you think of breaking up the quote like this?
  • @Bloom6132: Nice work on an interesting article. DanCherek (talk) 15:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @DanCherek: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I'm fine with breaking up the quote like in ALT0a. —Bloom6132 (talk) 15:10, 20 July 2021 (UTC)