Template:Did you know nominations/Roosevelt station (Sound Transit)
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:17, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
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Roosevelt station (Sound Transit)
[edit]...that the Roosevelt light rail station in Seattle was moved away from Interstate 5, after demands from community and business groups?
5x expanded by SounderBruce (talk). Self-nominated at 00:04, 19 August 2016 (UTC).
- The article says nothing about "demands", just some people wanted A, others wanted Y, and X was chosen after it turned out the cost difference wasn't as much as thought. I've struggled to find an actually interesting hook, but the best thing I could find was the the sinkhole, and even that's pretty ho-hum. Maybe we could say the tunnels were built using a "boring machine" -- get it? EEng 21:28, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, transit is quite boring indeed. Perhaps using Standard Radio (and its preserved facade) as a hook would be better? It's mentioned in the slides and video and cited as such. SounderBruce 05:13, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- ALT0a:
...that the Roosevelt light rail station in Seattle was moved away from Interstate 5 after feedback from community and business groups?
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- Yes, transit is quite boring indeed. Perhaps using Standard Radio (and its preserved facade) as a hook would be better? It's mentioned in the slides and video and cited as such. SounderBruce 05:13, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This article has been expanded from 966 chars to 8703 chars since 19:05, 09 March 2016 (UTC), a 9.01-fold expansion
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 8703 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely according to automated metrics (7.4% confidence; confirm)
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- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 128 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 128 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT2 is an appropriate length at 159 characters
- ✓ SounderBruce has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Joaquín Díaz Mena was performed for this nomination.
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that the Roosevelt light rail station in Seattle will incorporate a preserved Streamline Moderne facade from a music shop that was demolished for its construction?
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5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. ALT1 is definitely an improvement; thanks EEng! ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I tweaked the piped link and reduced the overlinking. QPQ done. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:27, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
- FTR ALT1 wasn't me, it was SounderBruce. EEng 00:15, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1: ...
(repeating tick for the bot)
I pulled this from q4 as I couldn't confirm the hook. The source says the builders offered to incorporate the facade but doesn't say whether or not the offer was accepted. Gatoclass (talk) 13:48, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- How about we change the hook to "plans to incorporate"? Gatoclass (talk) 07:53, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
- Another case in which trouble probably would have been avoided had the source been quoted right next to the hook. EEng 07:56, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
- I'm alright with changing the hook. And I've added the source to the hook's sentence to make it better. SounderBruce 05:14, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
- ALT2: ...that the future Roosevelt station in Seattle plans to incorporate a preserved Streamline Moderne facade from a music shop that was demolished for its construction?
- @Gatoclass: Notice that this has been sitting stale for a long time. Are there anymore issues to address? SounderBruce 09:13, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I'm surprised this one is still here, no there were no more issues IIRC, but since nobody else has done so in the meantime I will try to find time to complete the review on this tomorrow. Feel free to ping me again if I haven't come back to it in a day or two. Gatoclass (talk) 12:09, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- How about we change the hook to "plans to incorporate"? Gatoclass (talk) 07:53, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Gatoclass: Seems to have fallen off the main TTDYK page. Hope you don't forget about this one! SounderBruce 07:53, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
- I couldn't track down what happened to this one - it must have been inadvertently removed at some time, but I have restored it so it should get promoted soon. Cheers, Gatoclass (talk) 13:41, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
- It was unfortunately removed at the time of its original promotion because of the noinclude problems with the review bot; I've just now deleted those tags so it doesn't recur when this is finally promoted. Very sorry for the delay that caused, SounderBruce. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:00, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
- I couldn't track down what happened to this one - it must have been inadvertently removed at some time, but I have restored it so it should get promoted soon. Cheers, Gatoclass (talk) 13:41, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Gatoclass: Seems to have fallen off the main TTDYK page. Hope you don't forget about this one! SounderBruce 07:53, 2 December 2016 (UTC)