Template:Did you know nominations/Rose C. Davison
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:23, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
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Rose C. Davison[edit]
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Rose Davison at the Pan-American Exposition, 1901
...that educator Rose C. Davison (pictured) was sent to 1901 Pan-American Exposition in Buffalo, New York to serve as a representative of "Kanaka civility" in order to counter the international popularity of hula dancers as a symbol of Hawaii?- ALT1:
...that educator Rose C. Davison (pictured) was sent to 1901 Pan-American Exposition in Buffalo, New York to serve as a representative of "Kanaka civility" in order to counter the international popularity of hula dancers? - ALT2:
...that the educator Rose C. Davison (pictured) was sent to 1901 Pan-American Exposition in Buffalo, New York to "surprise the American population which yet believes that Hawaii is a land of cannibals"?
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- Reviewed: Spanish conquest of Honduras
Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 21:30, 7 May 2017 (UTC).
- Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. Image is licensed and a good illustration. All hooks seem a bit long. Trying shorter:
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...that Rose C. Davison (pictured) represented Hawaii at the 1901 Pan-American Exposition, focused on "Kanaka civility" to counter the image of hula dancers?--Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:18, 12 May 2017 (UTC)- The expedition was not focused on Hawaii though which is what that hook may be read as. How about this which is within character limits?--KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:50, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
- ALT4: ...that Rose C. Davison (pictured) represented Hawaii at the 1901 Pan-American Exposition as a symbol of "Kanaka civility" to counter the image of hula dancers?
- Striked the first and second hook as too much characters.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:52, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:36, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- The expedition was not focused on Hawaii though which is what that hook may be read as. How about this which is within character limits?--KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:50, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
