Template:Did you know nominations/Russell W. Volckmann

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 13:13, 7 September 2012 (UTC)

Russell W. Volckmann[edit]

Created/expanded by Thomas R. Fasulo (talk). Nominated by Trfasulo (talk) at 15:03, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

  • Date and 5x expansion from August 5 are fine, hook can pass, but there are still unreferenced claims (paras) in the article. I would like a second opinion (or ping me on my talk if referencign improves). Oh, and the hook needs wikifying (links need to be added, link to DYK article needs to be bolded). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:53, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
I added links to articles, but the phrase "unreferenced claims (paras) in the article" confuses me as the paragraph that claims he was one of the founding father of the SF has citations from four different sources. Thomas R. Fasulo (talk) 21:43, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I didn't see any new material added after Piotrus's review above, over two weeks ago; I've added "citation needed" templates to the article to paragraphs that require at least one citation according to DYK rules. (It doesn't have to be at the end of the paragraph, though that's ideal if one source covers all the material there.) Action needs to be taken on this nomination soon, if it is to remain active. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:20, 29 August 2012 (UTC)