Template:Did you know nominations/Rustin McIntosh
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 06:44, 19 June 2017 (UTC)
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Rustin McIntosh
[edit]- ... that Rustin McIntosh received the Croix de guerre for his service in World War I and the John Howland Award for his contributions to pediatrics? Source: Croix de guerre, John Howland Award (subscription required)
- Reviewed: Emma Ahuena Taylor
Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:37, 2 June 2017 (UTC).
Article creation data and filing date okay. Article length okay at 2652 bytes readable prose size. Article sourcing and neutrality good, no obvious copyvios to my eye. Hook size okay, hook neutrality okay, hook sourcing half online and half off but the latter can be verified online too. QPQ done. So all looks good.
- I would add that although not required for DYK, there are some things that could be added. I would make Babies Hospital a link at the top and let the redirect take the reader to its history, rather than the parenthetical you have later. Mention could be made of the book The McIntosh Era at Babies Hospital, 1931-1960: A Commemorative Volume to Honor Rustin McIntosh published by Babies Hospital in 1960, kind of like a Festschrift of sorts. You probably can add an image of the subject, such as this one, via the fair use "unique historic image" rationale – I've done that for some academics of past eras where getting a free image is very unlikely. Wasted Time R (talk) 19:58, 3 June 2017 (UTC)