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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 21:42, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Sandra Holden, Softball in Tasmania

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Sandra Holden

  • Reviewed: Victoire Conroy, Hurt: The EP
  • Comment: Article moved (possibly merged) from my user space. Bidgee co-nommed because took pictures specifically for DYK nom.

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk), Bidgee (talk). Nominated by LauraHale (talk) at 12:59, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Holden: New enough, long enough. Well referenced, paraphrasing check against this source is fine
SiT: I'd suggest expanding the lede a bit, a sentence or two. Other than that, looks fine:
SiT article looks unprofessional with only 5 words in the lede. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:25, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
I improved the lead. I'm good with ALT1. Was struggling how to word the idea but yours works much better. --LauraHale (talk) 10:30, 27 March 2012 (UTC)