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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:44, 25 March 2012 (UTC)

Sang Pencerah

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Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 06:33, 10 March 2012 (UTC)

I think it says something that a brand new article can pass GA before it is reviewed on DYK. Anyway, this is new enough, long enough and cited but the hook says it was denied admission while the article says that it was denied nomination (etc, etc). Was it withdrawn from the festival because of the protests? I get the impression from the article that it was shown, just not well received due to the protests. I have not checked the sources yet. Also you say "meant to" twice in the lead. Maybe reword a bit.--Ishtar456 (talk) 12:33, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
  • Rather than struggle with the wording I've crossed out the original hook. Wording in lede changed. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:43, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
both alts good, but I tweaked alt 2--Ishtar456 (talk) 13:09, 24 March 2012 (UTC)