Template:Did you know nominations/Santos Rodriguez
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
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Santos Rodriguez
[edit]- ... that the murder of Santos Rodriguez galvanized the Mexican-American community in Dallas? Source: Dallas Morning News
Moved to mainspace by Centehua (talk). Self-nominated at 15:37, 24 April 2019 (UTC).
- @Centehua: I will be reviewing this article. I'm looking forward to reading it and helping you polish it up! Michael Barera (talk) 15:44, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
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Overall: @Centehua: Wow, this article looks great! I think that it could be a Good Article in the not-too-distant future.
The only thing preventing me from passing it right now is there is one (short) paragraph that is currently completely unreferenced: the David Rodriguez paragraph. It needs to have at least one citation in order to be approved.
Also, there was one sentence (in the fourth paragraph of the Legacy section) I read while copyediting the article that was missing a word critical to its meaning: it read "Bonilla cited how a New York grand jury indicted a policeman over a 1973 as proof that there was a precedent for retroactive applications of due process." I'm assuming the word "murder" or "killing" was missing between "1973" and "as" (the context suggests this quite strongly), and when I copyedited I inserted the word "killing" in that gap. Please change this to "murder" or another more appropriate word, if necessary.
All in all, this article is really impressive. Once you provide a citation or two for the David Rodriguez paragraph, I will gladly pass this nomination. Great work! Michael Barera (talk) 02:32, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Michael Barera: Thank you! I have made the edits, I added citations to David's bio and clarified the legacy sentence (it was a shooting). Centehua (talk) 03:02, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
@Centehua: Thanks so much! That resolves my questions, so I'm passing the nomination now. Once again, nice work! Michael Barera (talk) 03:11, 25 April 2019 (UTC)