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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet talk 10:37, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

Shows of a Lost World

Created by Nathan121212 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:42, 19 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Shows of a Lost World; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - Some suggestions
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Nathan121212: Good article. though I will say that the hook could probably do better with mentioning either the amount of money they made or how they clashed with ticketmaster to lower prices. Also there's a refimprove tag so what's up with that? Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:32, 22 September 2023 (UTC) @Onegreatjoke: feel free to remove the refimprove unless you think there's a claim that needs sourcing. For another hook maybe,

I think my first hook is a little cleaner. Nathan121212 (talk) 08:13, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

Looks good now. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:58, 6 October 2023 (UTC)