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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 08:42, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Soetardjo Kartohadikusumo

  • ... that Soetardjo Kartohadikusumo had to fake his age to be eligible for elementary school? Source: [1]: "Soetardjo pada waktu mau masuk ke ELS umurnya sudah 8 tahun, padahal syaratnya 6 tahun, karena itu umur Soetardjo terpaksa dimudakan 2 tahun."

Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 17:04, 27 November 2021 (UTC).

  • Review: Is it new? This article was created on November 28 and I couldn’t find correlation between its content and other Wikipedia articles. Is it long enough? Meets this requirement without issue. Is it within policy? I find no obvious issues with neutrality or sourcing and no evidence of plagiarism from English-language sources.
On to the hook… It’s short enough, neutral and appealing. However, I find myself a bit stumped by how exactly he “reduced” his age. Was it by government sanction, fraudulent means, something else…? I believe that some clarification about the circumstances would be beneficial so that the general population can understand what is being said. QPQ was done. There is no image… Yet, the article has a PD image in the infobox. Illustrating the topic is not mandatory, but it helps the presentation.
Verdict? For now… But, I’m inclined to give this a “Yes” as soon my question about the alteration of his official age is clarified. - Caribbean~H.Q. 06:19, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
@Caribbean H.Q.: Fraud, in a way, by claiming that he was born in 1892 to the government. Juxlos (talk) 07:58, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Ok, can you can find a way to work that into an alternative hook? - Caribbean~H.Q. 08:56, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
@Caribbean H.Q.: maybe the revised original hook? Juxlos (talk) 16:12, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
I didn’t notice that… Well then, this one is good to go. - Caribbean~H.Q. 18:01, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
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