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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:57, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
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Sulagitti Narasamma
[edit]- ... that nonagenarian farm labourer and midwife, Sulagitti Narasamma, served for over 70 years by performing over 15,000 traditional deliveries free of charge in India? Source: Padma Sri Award official website and New Indian Express
- ALT1:... that an Indian farm labourer Sulagitti Narasamma served her community as a midwife for over 70 years by performing 15,000+ traditional deliveries free of charge? Source: Padma Sri Award official website and New Indian Express
- ALT2:... that midwife Sulagitti Narasamma was awarded the Padma Sri award for her service over 70 years by performing more than 15,000 traditional deliveries free of charge in India? Source: Padma Sri Award official website and New Indian Express
- ALT3:... that 98-year old Indian midwife, Sulagitti Narasamma, has undertaken over 15,000 free deliveries? Source: Padma Sri Award official website and New Indian Express
Created by NaveenNkadalaveni (talk). Self-nominated at 18:12, 23 March 2018 (UTC).
: The article is long and new enough and has no apparent copyvios. It's also well refed and well written, however, I made some tweaks to make it more encyclopedic. The image is free and comes with a proper license. ALT2 is more interesting than other suggestions, in my viewpoint. However, there are some issues which need to be fixed. First, the article relies mainly on one source and the nominator should try to add some more materials using other sources, preferably non-Indian ones. ALT2 is not really cited in the article body. We need to reassure that she was awarded for "her service over 70 years by performing more than 15,000 traditional deliveries ...". Another issue is that the infobox needs to be replaced by a more suitable one, the current one being an "Infobox Writer". -- Mhhossein talk 07:30, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein Thanks for the review. I have sorted out issues pointed out by you,1)Single source issue--> Corrected this by adding new citations 2)ALT2 is cited with first reference in the article, which tells us on what basis they have given Padma Shri award, its being published by Governamant of India's official Padma awards website. 3)Infobox is replaced from 'Writer' to 'Person'. Please let me know in case of anything required. --Naveen N Kadalaveni 17:02, 2 April 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by NaveenNkadalaveni (talk • contribs)
- NaveenNkadalaveni: I would expect a link to the website itself, rather than to an image. --Mhhossein talk 18:13, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein: Please check now, Website URL has been added in that article, instead of an image. Please do filter with the name Dr. Sulagiiti Narasamma in that website. --Naveen N Kadalaveni — Preceding unsigned comment added by NaveenNkadalaveni (talk • contribs) 04:02, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
- NaveenNkadalaveni: Thanks for the edits. Please use this source, too. --Mhhossein talk 08:25, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein: Done. Added this source. --Naveen N Kadalaveni — Preceding unsigned comment added by NaveenNkadalaveni (talk • contribs) 10:24, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- NaveenNkadalaveni: Thanks for the edits. Please use this source, too. --Mhhossein talk 08:25, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein: Please check now, Website URL has been added in that article, instead of an image. Please do filter with the name Dr. Sulagiiti Narasamma in that website. --Naveen N Kadalaveni — Preceding unsigned comment added by NaveenNkadalaveni (talk • contribs) 04:02, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
- NaveenNkadalaveni: I would expect a link to the website itself, rather than to an image. --Mhhossein talk 18:13, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein Thanks for the review. I have sorted out issues pointed out by you,1)Single source issue--> Corrected this by adding new citations 2)ALT2 is cited with first reference in the article, which tells us on what basis they have given Padma Shri award, its being published by Governamant of India's official Padma awards website. 3)Infobox is replaced from 'Writer' to 'Person'. Please let me know in case of anything required. --Naveen N Kadalaveni 17:02, 2 April 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by NaveenNkadalaveni (talk • contribs)