Template:Did you know nominations/Sumedha

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:06, 16 May 2019 (UTC)

Sumedha[edit]

Moved to mainspace by Farang Rak Tham (talk). Self-nominated at 07:33, 25 April 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: First hook is cited to online source, AGF for ALT1, which is a good source, but I haven't found the page. All other points check out, ready to go. The first hook is excellent and is the better of the two. Moonraker (talk) 03:22, 26 April 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, Moonraker! I have added a quote and made the url more specific.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 08:08, 26 April 2019 (UTC)
Farang Rak Tham, it has just struck me that there are some nit-pickers here who hate words in hooks being repeated, although I do not believe we have a rule against it. You might consider striking out "the Buddha-to-be", which doesn't really add anything. We do not want this to be pulled out of the Queue at the last minute, based on someone's fanatical perfectionism. I name no names. Moonraker (talk) 08:21, 26 April 2019 (UTC)
@Moonraker: Lol, I removed Buddha-to-be. Better?--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 11:57, 26 April 2019 (UTC)
That's an improvement, Farang Rak Tham, thank you. The revised main hook is good for me. Moonraker (talk) 18:57, 26 April 2019 (UTC)