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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:49, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

Swadeshi Steam Navigation Company

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5x expanded by Gfosankar (talk). Self-nominated at 14:22, 25 March 2019 (UTC).

  • The article expansion is new enough and long enough, and QPQ is present. However, I do have concerns that relate to the copyediting. I'm not sure if this is just my unfamiliarity with Indian English, but to me it seems like the GOCE nomination is definitely merited and would improve this article quite a bit. Sentences like "The objective of the company not only to run the ship between Tuticorin and Colombo but to train the navigational and ship building techniques to the Asians." look incomplete or just read a little unusually. An editor with more India knowledge may be able to help. Raymie (tc) 06:20, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
  • @Gfosankar: It looks a lot better now. I've also improved some areas where sentences read rather choppy and the phrase "the company" was excessively repeated. We are good to go. Raymie (tc) 04:57, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but I wonder: are you being deliberately vague about what kind of companies these are? I think you could do a lot better with the hook. Even that part about why he founded the company, "as an act of political and financial opposition to the British", is more interesting. Yoninah (talk) 23:23, 17 April 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you. @Raymie: could you review ALT1? Yoninah (talk) 21:53, 20 April 2019 (UTC)
  • Certainly. I've added one definite article (a "the") to the hook. ALT1 is included and cited (source 11). It is good to go! Raymie (tc) 22:34, 20 April 2019 (UTC)