Template:Did you know nominations/Taiari / Chalky Inlet

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The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 14:23, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

Taiari / Chalky Inlet

Improved to Good Article status by Turnagra (talk). Self-nominated at 08:17, 29 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Taiari / Chalky Inlet; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Turnagra: Good article. But, there's a hook citation problems. Alt2 doesn't even mention the chalky inlet so I can't verify that hook in there. Either tell me where it mentions the inlet or get rid of the hook. Onegreatjoke (talk) 13:41, 29 March 2023 (UTC)

  • Thanks Onegreatjoke - would it be enough to include it alongside the photo from Burton in the article with some minor rewording? This way it'd be showing that his photos of Fiordland, as referenced in the source, included trips to this inlet. Turnagra (talk) 17:43, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: just wondering if you had any thoughts on my suggestion above? Happy to remove that hook if necessary, but I think the image could be a good inclusion anyway so wanted to float that first. Turnagra (talk) 10:19, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
@Turnagra: The problem with alt2 is that the source doesn't seem to mention the Chalky inlet at all. So I can't verify if what the hook is saying is true. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:22, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: I was hoping that including the photo he took in the inlet would demonstrate that the photos he took of Fiordland per the source included this inlet, but all good - I'll just strike that one. Turnagra (talk) 19:39, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: apologies for the follow up ping again, just wondering if you had any further thoughts or if it'd be possible to progress this? Turnagra (talk) 05:20, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
The others are fine. Onegreatjoke (talk) 13:35, 18 April 2023 (UTC)