Template:Did you know nominations/The Glover Park Group

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 06:23, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

The Glover Park Group[edit]

  • Reviewed: Argentine Confederation
  • Comment: Note that, while the draft was made on the 5th, it was not moved to mainspace until the 9th. It's still within 5 days regardless, but I felt like it should be noted.

Created/expanded by WWB Too (talk). Nominated by Silver seren (talk) at 02:46, 10 February 2012 (UTC)

  • Offline source accepted in good faith; WSJ indicates that the article did indeed appear in 2002. Article length and date are okay. Suggested hook is fine but I would change from Diageo to Smirnoff vodka to increase reader interest. I would trim it of excess wikilinks and recast it, too. See below. Binksternet (talk) 20:25, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that a distilled beverage – Smirnoff vodka – was featured in an American television commercial for the first time in decades in a spot produced by The Glover Park Group?
That sounds fine and should raise more interest, yeah. SilverserenC 20:34, 10 February 2012 (UTC)