Template:Did you know nominations/The Good Terrorist
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 19:12, 24 March 2015 (UTC)
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The Good Terrorist[edit]
... that some critics have called the title of Doris Lessing's (pictured) novel The Good Terrorist an oxymoron?
- ALT1:... that a critic called the heroine of Doris Lessing's (pictured) novel The Good Terrorist neither a good person, nor a good revolutionary?
- ALT2:... that a critic said the heroine of the novel The Good Terrorist by Doris Lessing (pictured) is not a good person, nor a good revolutionary?
- Reviewed: Patersonia sericea
Improved to Good Article status by Bruce1ee (talk). Self nominated at 09:20, 19 March 2015 (UTC).
Substantial article on excellent varied sources. Good free image! The hook would make me read oxymoron, but not the novel article. How about including the quote "is not a good person, nor a good revolutionary" or one of the others? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:23, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion. I've added ALT1 – the two hooks could be combined, but it might make it a bit clumsy. —Bruce1eetalk 06:38, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- Like that, but: did "some critics" say that? I saw one. It should also show that it's a female protagonist. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:56, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- I've amended the hook and tweaked the article text to match the source. —Bruce1eetalk 14:08, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- Better, but now picky me: can you "call" someone "neither"? - English isn't my first language, that may be just me. Perhaps seriously quote, with quotation marks? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:33, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- "is not a good person, nor a good revolutionary" is taken from the article, and is not a qoute from the source, so I can't use quotation marks. Regarding the use of "neither" – the source uses it a few times in this context: "... the 'good terrorist', Lessing's heroine, is neither."; and later: "Neither is she a terrorist.". I don't see anything wrong with using that word here, but perhaps someone else can comment. I've also added ALT2, which doesn't use the word "neither". —Bruce1eetalk 18:38, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
ALT2 (without "called") preferred by me, but if others prefer ALT1, fine, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:09, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- "is not a good person, nor a good revolutionary" is taken from the article, and is not a qoute from the source, so I can't use quotation marks. Regarding the use of "neither" – the source uses it a few times in this context: "... the 'good terrorist', Lessing's heroine, is neither."; and later: "Neither is she a terrorist.". I don't see anything wrong with using that word here, but perhaps someone else can comment. I've also added ALT2, which doesn't use the word "neither". —Bruce1eetalk 18:38, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- Better, but now picky me: can you "call" someone "neither"? - English isn't my first language, that may be just me. Perhaps seriously quote, with quotation marks? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:33, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- I've amended the hook and tweaked the article text to match the source. —Bruce1eetalk 14:08, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- Like that, but: did "some critics" say that? I saw one. It should also show that it's a female protagonist. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:56, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion. I've added ALT1 – the two hooks could be combined, but it might make it a bit clumsy. —Bruce1eetalk 06:38, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
