Template:Did you know nominations/Theodore Sizer (art historian)
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The result was: promoted by HalfGig talk 14:42, 23 February 2017 (UTC)
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Theodore Sizer (art historian)[edit]
- ... that Theodore Sizer was named Yale University's first Pursuivant of Arms in 1963?
- Source: NY Times obit: "he became in 1963 Yale's first Pursuivant of Arms" [1], NY Times: "A Pursuivant of Arms" [2]
- Reviewed: Constance Dallas
Created by Zeete (talk). Self-nominated at 19:47, 20 February 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, well sourced, and with an interesting hook. QPQ done. However, Earwig finds a little close paraphrasing: the sentences "In 1927, he became an associate professor of the history of art at Yale University and an associate director of the Yale University Art Gallery. He was professor from 1931 until his retirement in 1957." are very similar to the sentences "He became an associate professor of the history of art at Yale and associate director of the Yale Art Gallery in 1927. Sizer was a professor of art history at Yale University from 1931 until his retirement in 1957." from [3]. I think these need to be rephrased before this can be accepted. —David Eppstein (talk) 22:45, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- @David Eppstein: Thanks for reviewing. I've rephrased these sentences, Earwig now reports Violation Unlikely 16.7%. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 12:53, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
Ok, as that was my only concern, we're good to go now. —David Eppstein (talk) 16:56, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
