Template:Did you know nominations/Thought Insertion
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The result was: rejected by Montanabw(talk) 05:11, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
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Thought Insertion[edit]
- ... that thought insertion is defined as feeling as if one's thoughts belong to someone else and have been inserted into one's mind?
5x expanded by Aphilli8 (talk). Self-nominated at 20:13, 25 April 2016 (UTC).
This article appears to be written like an essay, with reliance on primary sources and portions appearing to reflect original synthesis. Moreover, the sections Thought_insertion#Unbidden_Thoughts, Thought_insertion#Auditory_Verbal_Hallucinations, and Thought_insertion#Mind-to-Mind_Paradigm are uncited. The layout also seems to reflect that of a literature review or expository essay more than that of an encyclopaedia entry. Intelligentsium 02:03, 16 May 2016 (UTC)
Editor who nominated this article hasn't been online in a month and no one at all has edited the article since the review above. Given lack of enthusiasm, I am failing this nomination as unlikely to be improved upon in a timely matter. Montanabw(talk) 05:11, 31 May 2016 (UTC)