Template:Did you know nominations/Tui Manu'a Matelita
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:44, 25 June 2017 (UTC)
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Tui Manu'a Matelita[edit]
Tui Manu'a Matelita
... that Tui Manu'a Matelita (pictured), the Samoan queen of Manu'a, was described by Robert Louis Stevenson as a "little slip of a half-caste girl about twenty, who sits all day in a pink gown, in a little white European house"?(citation is valid: found at p. 405 of Sidney Colvin, Scribner, 1918, gBooks [1])
- Reviewed: Five Nights at Freddy's (series)
- Comment: Please hold for July 1st, the day of her ascession.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 18:38, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 01:31, 12 June 2017 (UTC).
- New enough (moved to m/space 12 June 2017); article length OK (3870 char.); neutral in tone; no copvio/ close editing except for the expected block quote from RLS; all sections fully cited; the hook meets formatting guidelines,
but is over 20 characters too long, sorry (has to be less than 200)- the obvious suggestion is to trim the RLS quote. Something like Tui Manu'a Matelita (pictured), a Samoan queen, was described by Robert Louis Stevenson as "a slip" of a girl, "about twenty, who sits all day in a pink gown, in a little white European house"Hook good in length, see further below;Butthe hook is,notwithstanding that, isneutral, interesting, and sourced; Image is free, looks okay at a reduced size and is of course in use in the article itself. QPQ- this is mine for Dolly Rudeman. Cheers. — O Fortuna semper crescis, aut decrescis 14:10, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
- New enough (moved to m/space 12 June 2017); article length OK (3870 char.); neutral in tone; no copvio/ close editing except for the expected block quote from RLS; all sections fully cited; the hook meets formatting guidelines,
@Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi: How about this?--KAVEBEAR (talk) 18:13, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
- alt1 ... that Tui Manu'a Matelita (pictured), the Samoan queen of Manu'a, was described by Robert Louis Stevenson as "a little slip" of a girl, "who sits all day in a pink gown, in a little white European house"? (citation is valid: found at p. 405 of Sidney Colvin, Scribner, 1918, gBooks [2])
- @KAVEBEAR: That's great. Sorry to pull you up over something as petty as -23 letters?! But, you know. Take care!
Good to go with ALT 1. — O Fortuna semper crescis, aut decrescis 18:20, 13 June 2017 (UTC)