Template:Did you know nominations/Ty Hensley

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 07:44, 14 February 2015 (UTC)

Ty Hensley

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• ... that New York Yankees' prospect Ty Hensley was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because he did not want to discuss his $1.2 million signing bonus?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Radioplane
• Comment: As you can see from the article history, I created this as a redirect on November 12, 2012. In the baseball project, we have a standing consensus to use these minor league player pages to incubate articles on people who may become notable. This is that Nov 12, 2012 edit where I created the content. As of a few days ago, it was still there. To make it as easy as possible here, I simply unmerged that content with this edit, which had 688 B of prose. Now, it's over 3800, which is 5x. Given the nature of the incident that happened, I'm open to discussion on what a good and appropriate hook would be.

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 15:56, 9 January 2015 (UTC).

• Comment The proposed hook is a mess of confusing pronouns. I can't work out whose bonus who didn't want to discuss. --Dweller (talk) 16:01, 5 February 2015 (UTC)

• How's this? – Muboshgu (talk) 16:25, 5 February 2015 (UTC)

• ALT1 ... that New York Yankees' prospect Ty Hensley was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because Hensley did not want to discuss his $1.2 million signing bonus?

• Good stuff. --Dweller (talk) 16:37, 5 February 2015 (UTC)

• Full review needed now that hook is set. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:47, 6 February 2015 (UTC)

• I got slightly different numbers for the 5x expansion, but it was still more than enough. The date of expansion/creation checks out fine. The hook is interesting and I have moved a reference to ensure that it is suitably referenced inline. Spotchecks reveal no evidence of copyvio or close para-phrasing. Harrias ^talk 07:41, 13 February 2015 (UTC)