Template:Did you know nominations/Under the Protection of Ka'Bah

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:12, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Under the Protection of Ka'Bah[edit]

  • ALT1:... that the costumes for Under the Protection of Ka'Bah, Indonesia's submission to this year's Oscars, were reported to cost as much as an entire horror movie?
  • Comment: Created as a stub by Lugnuts (talk · contribs) on October 15th, expanded by me. As Lugnuts's stub was 250 characters, I don't believe he warrants a credit. If the reviewer disagrees, please feel free to add.

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 15:53, 17 October 2011 (UTC)

  • The plot section requires a reference, and could probably do with being rewritten, the tense seems a little off at the moment. (Though that latter comment is not a major DYK issue.) Foreign language references AGF, along with their reliability: I strongly prefer ALT1. Let me know when you include a reference for the plot, and I'll reassess. Harrias talk 10:28, 5 November 2011 (UTC)
  • Regarding the citation, please read Wikipedia:Did you know/Supplementary guidelines number D2. "A rule of thumb is one inline citation per paragraph, excluding the intro, plot summaries, and paragraphs which summarize other cited content." (emphasis mine) I will take a look at any grammar issues. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:38, 5 November 2011 (UTC)
  • Everything is present tense, which is acceptable for plots. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:41, 5 November 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I just had a look through WP:FILMPLOT: not an area I venture into often, normally I'd skip over the nomination, but given its age, I thought I'd have a look. All approved now. Thanks for the quick response. Harrias talk 10:46, 5 November 2011 (UTC)
  • No problem, thanks for picking this up. Shame very few people like reviewing Indonesian movie hooks. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:56, 5 November 2011 (UTC)