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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by valereee (talk) 11:19, 25 June 2019 (UTC)

Wei Shoukun

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Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 21:45, 23 June 2019 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in English-language sources. Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. QPQ done. But I think it would be more interesting to highlight some of his impressive accomplishments, like:
  • ALT1: ... that Wei Shoukun, the longest-living academician of the Chinese Academy of Sciences, taught four or five generations of Chinese metallurgists at ten universities? Yoninah (talk) 10:46, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
@Yoninah: Thanks for your timely review and suggestion. However, I'm a bit worried that the concept of "generation" is too nebulous for the hook, even though that's what the source says, and people may raise issues at ERRORS. How about this:
  • @Zanhe: OK, but did he teach at all 10 universities for 80 years? Alternately, we could write:
  • ALT2a: ... that Wei Shoukun, the longest-living academician of the Chinese Academy of Sciences, taught at 10 universities over his 80-year career? Yoninah (talk) 20:35, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
@Yoninah: Thanks, ALT2a looks great! -Zanhe (talk) 22:55, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you. We need another reviewer for ALT2a. Yoninah (talk) 09:28, 25 June 2019 (UTC)
  • The previous review stands on its merits per the article generally: for the hook, passing—per AGF on foreign language / offline sources—ALT2a which is in the article and fully cited, within length and interesting to a general audience. ——SerialNumber54129 09:50, 25 June 2019 (UTC)