Template:Did you know nominations/What Is Love (TV series)

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The result was: promoted by ceradon (talk • contribs) 19:05, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

What Is Love (TV series)[edit]

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... that Taiwanese actress Jade Chou was once compared to her character in What Is Love because they were both in their thirties and still single?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mohammad Beg

Created by 001Jrm (talk). Self nominated at 23:20, 9 January 2015 (UTC).

The article is long enough and new enough at the time of the nomination. It is decently written. The hook is short enough; AGF on the citation, as it's in Chinese. Three sections, however, are completely without citations: "Broadcast", "Cast" and "Synopsis". The last of these in particular is a problem. Relentlessly (talk) 12:44, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for reviewing! I added direct sources on the three sections. Let me know if there are any more problems. :) 001Jrm (talk) 03:18, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Looks good now. Thanks for the edit, 001Jrm. I've made some minor grammatical changes for more natural English. Relentlessly (talk) 08:07, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much! ^^ 001Jrm (talk) 02:59, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

Frankly, I find the article rather insubstantial. The first 3 paragraphs under Production, which make up the bulk of that section, put undue weight on a few shooting mishaps, rather than actually discuss production personnel and scheduling. The Filming Locations section could probably be incorporated into this section, in prose rather than columns. Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 14 February 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for your review. I already added a prose to the locations section and added ~~Plot~~ Synopsis section to tell the summary of the whole story of the series. Let me know if there are more concerns. :) 001Jrm (talk) 08:08, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, the Synopsis section is unencyclopedic and I removed it per WP:FANCRUFT. I edited and tightened the rest of the copy to conform with Wikipedia standards. The article looks start-class now, which is enough for DYK. I tweaked the hook as well. Restoring tick based on Relentlessly's review. Yoninah (talk) 09:46, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Oh wow! I didn't know that. I sometimes see those in other articles and I thought that it'll actually be of help that's why I added it. Thanks for telling me. :) 001Jrm (talk) 11:19, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, Yoninah, for your help and for expanding my knowledge of Wikipedia policies! Relentlessly (talk) 13:06, 15 February 2015 (UTC)