Template:Did you know nominations/Wizard Pharmacy

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The result was: rejected by Theleekycauldron (talk) 10:53, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Wizard Pharmacy

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... ~~that Wizard Pharmacy became the first Western Australian pharmacy and medical clinic to issue and dispense the state's first electronic prescription?~~ Source: source

Created by Hammad Chaudhry (talk). Self-nominated at 19:37, 5 January 2022 (UTC).

I suggest this alternate hook, if it's OK with Hammad Chaudhry the article does meet the other non-hook criteria—

ALT1: that Wizard Pharmacy, also a clinic, both issued and dispensed the first electronic prescription in Western Australia?

Psiĥedelisto (talk • contribs) ^{please always ping!} 07:30, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

I think it is better. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hammad Chaudhry (talk • contribs) 17:18, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Full review needed, including proposed ALT1. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:33, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

I shall review this. Storye book (talk) 20:16, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Thank you for this article about a pharmacy chain. Just one issue: The end of the first para of the History section is not cited. If you have no citation for that last sentence, then please remove the sentence to the talk page until you or someone else can find a citation. When that issue is resolved, this nomination should be good to go. Storye book (talk) 20:49, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

I was not able to find any citation for that last sentence. I removed that.

Thank you, Hammad Chaudhry. This nomination is now good to go with ALT1. Storye book (talk) 17:17, 21 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you too Storye book. How do I know when it appeared on the "main page"?

Returned from queue 3 because of an undisclosed paid tag, per this discussion. Gatoclass (talk) 08:24, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
Article is currently also nominated at AfD theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 08:34, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- I've just speedy deleted it. The nominator has been blocked for undisclosed COI editing, of which this was part. Nick-D (talk) 10:03, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
  - Article has been (correctly) deleted, so this nom is no longer eligible. Joseph2302 (talk) 10:07, 27 January 2022 (UTC)