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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Fuebaey (talk) 12:51, 27 December 2014 (UTC)

Yung Fung-shee

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Yung Fung Shee Memorial Centre, located in Kwun Tong, Kowloon, Hong Kong

  • Reviewed: K'inich Yo'nal Ahk I
  • Comment: This article is translated from the Chinese Wikipedia. I am not in a rush to promote this article and I understand that the article may contain several issues to be resolved. I may need some time to reply. All reviewers can feel free to review the article.

Moved to mainspace by HYH.124 (talk). Self nominated at 09:50, 20 November 2014 (UTC).

  • The article confuses an "inheritance" with bequest. Her inheritance would be something she received from someone else's estate, not that which she left to others. EEng (talk) 13:12, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
    Do you think I should use "property" or "assets"? HYH.124 (talk) 03:58, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
    Erm... So should I change everything in the article from "bestowed her inheritance" to "left her estate"? I need some help on this. HYH.124 (talk) 04:02, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
Made a quick edit pass. Good luck! EEng (talk) 09:02, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
Hi, but unfortunately, your edits have shown certain errors, for example, "Her 1969 will provided that assets then HK$3 million go to the Hong Kong Government for the construction of free healthcare centres and clinics for the needy". You have also removed some information in the article, so I will be proofreading it again. HYH.124 (talk) 04:40, 24 November 2014 (UTC)
By all means fix any errors I made. EEng (talk) 05:17, 24 November 2014 (UTC)
  • This article is new enough and long enough. The bequest to the Hong Kong government is well cited. The sources are in Chinese and accepted in good faith. The image is appropriately licensed. Good to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:17, 26 December 2014 (UTC)