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First Lutheran hymnal

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle}

... that the first Lutheran hymnal (pictured) contained only eight hymns, four of them by Martin Luther?

Reviewed: Tatanua mask ([1])
Comment: This article was submitted with two others as a 3-article hook, but I am removing it from that submission and placing it here instead.

As Luther has attention enough:

ALT1... that the first Lutheran hymnal (pictured) contained only eight hymns on five melodies by three poets, Martin Luther, Paul Speratus and probably Justus Jonas? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:22, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Created/expanded by Sharktopus (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 23:30, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Hook

Length, format, content rules: Both original hook and alt1 are fine. I'd go with Alt1 just to give the two lesser known guys a shout out.
Source: Properly sourced (two sources)
Interest: Yes, it's interesting.
Image suitability, if applicable: Appropriate
ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article

Length: 1603 characters. I like articles to be at least 2500 characters, but that's fine, it's long enough.
Vintage: Checks out
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): V, RS not a BLP.
Neutrality: Neutral
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing, copyvio: Checked the 3 sources available online. The article's fine, proper paraphrasing.
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: Well written

Volunteer Marek (talk) 20:46, 5 August 2011 (UTC) Comments/discussion:[reply]