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Gisborough Priory[edit]
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know, unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page). No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk)
- ... that Gisborough Priory (pictured) was one of the last monastic houses in England to fall victim to the Dissolution of the Monasteries in 1540?
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5x expanded by Prioryman (talk). Self nom at 07:42, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
- Expansion - good; hook - would be nice to see it in the lead and
cannot verify the offline source so will agf;I like the image. I checked this source and am confused. The source says the alum industry began in Queen Elizabeth's time, the article says it was the direct result of the dissolution, which Henry VIII caused. Maybe needs a little clarification. Also I think the information about the alum is interesting and bringing the "piss" to the area to make alum - suggest trying to incorporate into the hook.Otherwise fine. There's a huge variance in the quality of the writing and because one of the sources is not available online, want to think about this a bit. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 02:40, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
- Please hold on re the alum industry section. I didn't write it - someone else added it - and I have some issues with it too; I'll rewrite it today. Prioryman (talk) 07:24, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
- Expansion - good; hook - would be nice to see it in the lead and
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