Template talk:Did you know/Packera franciscana

Packera franciscana

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle}

• ... that the San Francisco Peaks ragwort (pictured) is found only around the peaks in Coconino County, Arizona?

• Reviewed: Iain Blair ([1])

Created by IceCreamAntisocial (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 07:03, 26 July 2011 (UTC)

Article looks fine though you might want to add imperial conversions for the measurements. The hook is a bit strange: why "on the mountain" when it is found over two peaks and on the saddle between them. Is it missing an "s" ("on the mountains")? Also "rare" is redundant since the hook later informs that it is only found in one small area. Yomangani^talk 21:46, 26 July 2011 (UTC)

Better now? :) Rcej (Robert) – talk 03:30, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

The hook isn't riveting, but yes. Yomangani^talk 09:42, 28 July 2011 (UTC) (That is to say, I have checked items one to five on the proposed checklist and I hereby swear that the article has not been found wanting in any of those departments as a result of my investigations Yomangani^talk 17:04, 28 July 2011 (UTC))