User:Aaji0085/OLES2129

13/08/18

The article I chose was "Avengers: Infinity War." Upon quickly reading the article, if I were to be the one to first create it, I would've mentioned how this movie's story line was mixture between it's continuation to the Marvel Cinematic Universe, in other words, to their latest movie Black Panther, but also to the Infinity War prelude comics. If I were the second reader of this article, I would edit the way the plot was written, adding more details of how and why it is Thanos, the protagonist of the story is in pursuit of said infinity stones, and the casualties the Avengers faced with his success.

20/08/18

Activity 1 - The Things That Matter

In order for this article to a C-class quality label, it needs to contain more information that can allow a casual reader to learn something about the album. One way to do this would be the inclusion of the writing process of the album, the promo it had prior to its release, as well as general descriptions and back story about each song in the album itself.

Activity 2

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kadappakada&action=history

27/08/18

Activity 1

Featured Article: Cloud Gate

This article is classified as a featured article because

It is well written, it has great prose, is well structured and informative.
It is comprehensive, it is very detailed, containing lots of information about the construction of the sculpture, its artist, etc.
it is well-researched, it It has over 80 reference links, 5 of which are well credited journals and press articles such as The MIT Press.
It is neutral, as it is written very objectively, and all the subjective comments about the sculpture have been categorized and separated in a Reception section.
It is stable, as there are no edit wars going on in regards to the content of this article, and the article has remained the same for a good amount of time.
This article also has a very informative and succinct lead, summarizing what this sculpture is, where to find it, who designed it, how it was made, and a brief history about it.
This article has an appropriate structure, containing useful sub-headings and sections, each of which are important in the compartmentalizing of information for the article. These sections include one for its design, reception, and how its significance in popular culture.
This article has consistent citations, with never more than an entire paragraph going without an inline citation.
This article contains media. It has various pictures that are relevant to the sculpture, including a picture of Cloud Gate itself, an image of the artist Sir Anish Kapoor, and a map of Millennium Park where this sculpture can be found. These images are also well cited.
This article has a good length, being long enough that it is informative, but still short enough that the information is succinct and only relevant to the topic at hand, that of which is the Cloud Gate sculpture.

03/09/18

Activity 1

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bachelor_of_Malaysia&action=history

Activity 2

Article: Bacon wrapped food

Associated WikiProject: Food and Drink

References:

10/09/18

Activity 1

Article: "Don't Stop the Music (Rihanna Song)"

Source: http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/article/18573449/rihanna-closes-radio-1s-hackney-weekend-festival

The author is Greg Cochrane who is a five year Music reporter at BBC Radio 1's Newsbeat, who has won the prestigious British Society of Magazine Editors New Editor of the Year award.

It was published on the BBC.

The information within the source is independently verifiable, as we were able to find the same information in many other resources.

The age of the source is relative to the topic as the article was written around the time the event took place.

This article was targeted for the general public, more specifically music fans.

The source doesn't omit important details or over represent others, and the information in the article are facts not opinions.

The article is structured as a news report article.

This source is significant towards the Wikipedia article as it confirms that Rihanna performed this song in front of a giant sphinx.

08/10/18

Good article: Mark Oliphant (Featured Article of the day)

The article is well constructed and written in a clear and concise manner. It follows the manual of style of guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch,fiction and list incorporation. A list of 99 references is given and presented in accordance with the layout style guidelines. The in-line citations are from reliable sources, including published journals, government articles, encyclopedias, etc. All the research done is sourced and contains no copyright violations and plagiarism. There have been a lot of edits but no signs of an ongoing edit war. The article is supported by lots of images and the images are tagged with their respective copyright statuses.

Bad Article - Abobra

The article Abobra wouldn’t be considered a good Wikipedia article as it doesn’t cover the Wikipedia’s criteria for a good article. According to Wikipedia, a good article must be well written, verifiable, broad in its coverage, neutral, stable and illustrated. This article wouldn’t be considered well written, as it lacks a lead, section headings, lists, pictures, etc. This article also wouldn’t be considered verifiable, as it lacks reliable resources and in line citations. It only has one source, that of which wasn’t cited in the main article. This article lacks illustrations, and covers only a very minimal part of the subject.