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Analysis of Article

Summary- I didn't like the part where they brought up about its a Greek word. I felt like that wasn't necessary for the article to know.
Topics- The Subspecialties was to broad.

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Pediatrics. N.p., 2013. Web.^[2]

Alexander, Harriet Semmes. (1984). American and British Poetry: A Guide to the Criticism, 1925-1978^[3]

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Your revised paragraph goes here. Pediatrics is known as a new modern medicine in the society today.[1] Hippocrates, Aristotle, Celsus, Soranus, and Galen, understood the differences in growing and maturing organisms that necessitated different treatment: Ex toto non sic pueri ut viri curari debent ( "In general, boys should not be treated in the same way as men."Celsus[2]).[1]

Some of the oldest traces of pediatrics can be discovered in Ancient India where children's doctors were called as kumara bhrtya.[1] Sushruta Samhita an ayurvedic text, composed during the sixth century BC contains the text about pediatrics.[3] Another ayurvedic text from this period is Kashyapa Samhita.[4][5]

A second century AD manuscript by the Greek physician and gynecologist Soranus of Ephesus dealt with neonatal pediatrics.[6] Byzantine physicians Oribasius, Aëtius of Amida, Alexander Trallianus, and Paulus Aegineta contributed to the field.[1] The Byzantines also built brephotrophia (crêches).[1] Islamic writers served as a bridge for Greco-Roman and Byzantine medicine and added ideas of their own, especially Haly Abbas, Serapion, Avicenna, and Averroes. The Persian scholar and doctor al-Razi (865–925) published a short treatise on diseases among children.[7] The first book about pediatrics was Libellus [Opusculum] de aegritudinibus et remediis infantium 1472 ("Little Book on Children Diseases and Treatment"), by the Italian pediatrician Paolo Bagellardo.[8] In sequence came Bartholomäus Metlinger's Ein Regiment der Jungerkinder 1473, Cornelius Roelans (1450-1525) no title Buchlein, or Latin compendium, 1483, and Heinrich von Louffenburg (1391-1460) Versehung des Leibs written in 1429 (published 1491), together form the Pediatric Incunabula, four great medical treatises on children's physiology and pathology.[

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^ Wikipedia reference created with Cite tool
^ "Pediatrics". pediatrics.aappublications.org. Retrieved 2015-10-07.
^ Alexander, Harriet Semmes (1984). American and British poetry : a guide to the criticism, 1925-1978. Manchester: Manchester University Press. p. 163. ISBN 0-7190-1706-8. Retrieved 5 May 2015.

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[2] "Pediatrics". pediatrics.aappublications.org. Retrieved 2015-10-07.

[3] Alexander, Harriet Semmes (1984). American and British poetry : a guide to the criticism, 1925-1978. Manchester: Manchester University Press. p. 163. ISBN 0-7190-1706-8. Retrieved 5 May 2015.

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