User:Allykwong/Bellevue Botanical Garden/Aliylo Peer Review
Peer review
[edit]This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing? allykwong
- Link to draft you're reviewing: Bellevue Botanical Garden
Lead
[edit]Lead evaluation
[edit]The new lead that you have is very concise and offers a nice overview of what the Bellevue Botanical Gardens are. I do not see any information in the lead that is not within the body of the article/ a subheading that it looks like you will include.
Content
[edit]Content evaluation
[edit]I am assuming that the content is up to date: I do not know much about the Bellevue Botanical Gardens. I have only read through what has been completed so far, but it looks like there is a really good plan for the rest of the article based off of the subheading outline.
Tone and Balance
[edit]Tone and balance evaluation
[edit]There are not any persuasive claims and the tone is neutral. You present the facts well without including bias.
Sources and References
[edit]Sources and references evaluation
[edit]For the first two sources, it took me to the same site. I think that you may have accidentally linked it twice? You are able to reuse a citation from a source that you already have by choosing to reuse a citation.
Organization
[edit]Organization evaluation
[edit]It is well written, and there are not any obvious spelling/ grammar mistakes. I also really like how you broke down your sections.
Images and Media
[edit]Images and media evaluation
[edit]I do not see any images, but I think that it could be a nice idea to include images of each garden under each section.
Overall impressions
[edit]Overall evaluation
[edit]I really enjoyed reading your article. I think that it will be really good once it is finished. It may be nice if you are able to find some more articles: magazine/ newspaper articles, etc. However, it is kind of hard to find sources for this topic.