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Hi, I'm working on the article

Collaborative decision-making software https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collaborative_decision-making_software 

This is the part that I'm going to work on it (Technology factors that underpin enterprise CDM)

Thanks


I'm reviewing the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/End-to-end_principle and i would suggest a small point that can be replaced in the article .

The last line in the concept part i would make some changes and replace it to be in the first lane. The meaning of the end-to-end principle has been continuously reinterpreted ever since its initial articulation. Also, noteworthy formulations of the end-to-end principle can be found prior to the seminal 1981 Saltzer, Reed, and Clark paper.[2]

my suggestion :

The meaning of the end-to-end principle has been continuously reinterpreted ever since its initial explanation. ( without the second part of the sentence)

Thank for your help