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Alexander, Harriet Semmes. (1984). American and British Poetry: A Guide to the Criticism, 1925-1978^[2]
Amur Pike FIsh. N.p., 2004. Web. 2013.^[3]

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The Amur pike, also known as the blackspotted pike, (Esox reichertii) is a pike native to the Amur River system in east Asia, as well as freshwater habitat on the island of Sakhalin.^[2] Closely related to the northern pike, it reaches a length of 115 cm (45 inches), sporting a silvery body with small, black spots. Like other pike, this species is prized for sport fishing.

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The Amur Pike, a.k.a The Blackspotted Pike, is the pioneer to the Amur River, which is located in the southeast part of Asia. It also has a freshwater environment associated with the northern pike. It stretches 115 cm, showing a shiny body with tiny black spots. In comparison with other pike's, this is the most prized when it comes to sports.

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^ Alexander, Harriet Semmes (1984). American and British poetry : a guide to the criticism, 1925-1978. Manchester: Manchester University Press. p. 163. ISBN 0-7190-1706-8. Retrieved 5 May 2015.
^ "All Fishing Buy, Amur Pike fish, habitats, characteristics, pike fishing methods". www.allfishingbuy.com. Retrieved 2015-10-07.

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[2] Alexander, Harriet Semmes (1984). American and British poetry : a guide to the criticism, 1925-1978. Manchester: Manchester University Press. p. 163. ISBN 0-7190-1706-8. Retrieved 5 May 2015.

[3] "All Fishing Buy, Amur Pike fish, habitats, characteristics, pike fishing methods". www.allfishingbuy.com. Retrieved 2015-10-07.

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