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User:Brontosh/Photo-referencing/Studentuw123 Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Brontosh

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brontosh/Photo-referencing?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Photo-referencing

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Overall:
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I'm glad you added sections.

You did a really nice job adding to the article.

The references tab could have a cleaner look

I think you should add more sources maybe another photo as well.

Lead:
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Your edits to the lead were great, once there are more added sections, the lead will be able to provide more information.

Content:
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It seems like all the content is drafted well! I don't know a lot about photo referencing, but the edits from the first article that you made, made the article so much better content wise.

Tone and Balance:
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Tone and balance seemed great! No comments here!

Sources:
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This needs more sources and a general cleanup of the tab.

Organization:
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The organization was great with your contributions! Add in more sections!