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Wikipedia Assignment: Part III

The Wikipedia article on Nebula was well written and had a lot of strengths such as the use of well supported facts and the neutral viewpoint throughout. Having well supported ideas backed up with concrete facts helps the reader trust the information being consumed while having the neutral viewpoint on the topic. Some weaknesses I noticed in the article was that the writer did not place some photos of the certain types of nebulae next to respective section where they are talked about. This can lead to some possible confusion from the reader; they could believe that they photo next to the description might belong to what is being talked about. I plan to try and rearrange some of the photos on the wiki page as well as add two photos that are missing from there respective section. There is one photo in particular that I think needs some updates; it groups 4 different types of nebula together but, but does not list which is which. I plan to remove it and add two different photos (planetary nebula and protoplanetary nebula) to take its place.

Edits

I made two edits to the nebula wiki page. I added a photo of the oyster nebula (planetary nebula) and a photo of the red rectangle nebula (protoplanetary nebula) and added descriptions for them both.