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Lucius Julius Gainius Fabius Agrippa

Improvements made:

  • Sentence clarity
  • Reduced wordiness and complex thoughts
  • Cohesion of thought & flow
  • Sectioning to break up the different points and improve overall accessibility
  • Created sections:
  • Family, Ancestry, and Early Life
  • Work in Apamea
  • Legacy
  • Tone/ Neutral POV
  • Removed section of content defined by Wikipedia as 'Original Research'

Antarctic flora

Improvements made:

  • Cleaned up repeat links
  • Clarity of thought
  • Reworded the first two paragraphs for cohesion and flow
  • Additional sectioning of facts
  • Added the section on origin
  • Improvements to how someone whose specialty is not botany reads and can comprehend the article