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Analysis of Article

After reading my article about a Beauty Salon , I found that this article lacked many things. The article says that there is a distinction between a Beauty Salon and a Hair Salon , but over time Beauty Salons and Hair Salons have evolved into basically into the same thing. Back in the early 1800's and 1900's Beauty Salons and Hair Salons were very disparate. Beauty Salons were used strictly for manicures , pedicures , spa care and things to that nature. While Hair Salons were used for only getting your hair treated. Over time , Beauty Salons and Hair Salons have evolved into basically the same thing.

Reading List

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Author’s name. (Date). Short title.^[1]
Alexander, Harriet Semmes. (1984). American and British Poetry: A Guide to the Criticism, 1925-1978^[2]

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Beauty Salons have been helping girls all over the world before they even evolved into an actual salon. Even in the earlier years , salons have been the get away for all women . Salons have the ability to make women and girls feel beautiful on the inside and outside.

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A beauty salon ( sometimes referred to as a beauty shop) is a business that can deal with hair care , spa treatments , and nail care , and even cosmetics for men and women[1]. Hair styling dates back all the way to the 1880's. Hairdressers used to decorate their trunk that held their scissors, combs , lotion and other styling materials[3]. Beauty Salons date back as early as the 1800's. Women would come to the Salon strictly to ge3t their hair done and talk and enjoy the company of others[2]. Today's Beauty Salons women still gather to enjoy themselves and have a good time. The Beauty Salon is almost a place for women to get away for a while and relieve themselves from everyday stress. [4]

^ Wikipedia reference created with Cite tool
^ Alexander, Harriet Semmes (1984). American and British poetry : a guide to the criticism, 1925-1978. Manchester: Manchester University Press. p. 163. ISBN 0-7190-1706-8. Retrieved 5 May 2015.
^ "A History of the Hair Salon and Styling". A History of the Hair Salon and Styling.
^ Rothkop, Kathie. "Salon Glam". Salon Glam.
^ The Rise of Hair Salons Through The Ages http://www.curioushistory.com/the-rise-of-hair-salons-through-the-ages/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
^ "Glamour Daze- A Vintage Fashion And Beauty Archive". Glamour Daze- A Vintage Fashion And Beauty Archive. March 10th 2011. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)

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[2] Alexander, Harriet Semmes (1984). American and British poetry : a guide to the criticism, 1925-1978. Manchester: Manchester University Press. p. 163. ISBN 0-7190-1706-8. Retrieved 5 May 2015.

[3] "A History of the Hair Salon and Styling". A History of the Hair Salon and Styling.

[4] Rothkop, Kathie. "Salon Glam". Salon Glam.

[5] The Rise of Hair Salons Through The Ages http://www.curioushistory.com/the-rise-of-hair-salons-through-the-ages/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

[6] "Glamour Daze- A Vintage Fashion And Beauty Archive". Glamour Daze- A Vintage Fashion And Beauty Archive. March 10th 2011. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)

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