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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kids_Off_The_Block I decided to investigate Kids Off The Block (KOB). Some areas of improvement I saw was that the lead could be improved. It stated at the beginning that KOB was a monument but it't really an organization. Another area that could be updated is the contact information. The history section could also be expanded by using the information from the KOB video reference but not talked about on the wiki page. The last thing I would change is to add a separate section just talking about the monument. Flore407 (talk) 16:47, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
The other non profit I looked at was The glass sipper project. The website linked to the wiki page isn't updated.glassslipperproject There should be other sections created talking about their history, contact info, volunteer info, donations info, news section info. Their Facebook and social media pages should be reference for additional information and pictures. https://www.facebook.com/GlassSlipperProjectChicago/. Flore407 (talk) 17:09, 20 September 2017 (UTC)